RAGE

Have you ever felt my pain?
Have you ever watched me cry?
Just wanted an entertaining fool
And you yourself appeared sly....

Nothing is gained in your presence
Just an abnormal temporary feeling
Even lost a lot of time and much more
With no one stood me healing....

Stabbed those priceless wishes
Ruined my ambitious goals
Filled me completely with you
From my mind,even to my soul...

Never wanted the same from you
but a little is 'YES expected'
"Baby but I can't do this thing
this will make my schedule hectic...."

Ohh girl how you can be so selfish
How you so much blind
No matter how many boys are their for you
But this one's(me) hard to find....

So now decided myself everything
Without worrying for your convenience
Just ending this f*****g drama
And thinking of living with reliable common sense....

Written By - Basu Gupta

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow this is so full of anger and rage.You penned it splendidly :)

[Basu Gupta]

I just made an attempt
glad you liked it

[Vidya Bacchus]

I did ...........:)

[Aaron the Baron]

Wow this is great! love it! I've wanted to shout this poem many times! you capture it as it is felt! such rage at the lack of effort and rejection!

[topsyturvy]

Ha, I loved this, it portrayed your feelings well.

[Tom]

Experience teaches us wisdom !

A interesting philosophical situation and the correct outcome was poetically applied !

[lee von cleef]

Old Ben told us Sense isn't so common, and this is uncommonly good.