DRUG AND CURE

a piece to describe little of her beauty..

Your eyes have such an admiring look
Which will make even the prettiest girl to quarrel
Not with mortals but with their Creator
Full of arguments for a lost battle.....

Mused in your thoughts and dreams
I realized the existence of my worthy heart
The only grudge placed deep within
'Why we're still some distance apart?'...

Always brought that 'you love me?' trial
In the state of surety or doubt
Counteract the ultimate result smartly
Whenever a 'NO' is sensed in the hasty bout....

What am I supposed to do
When you're my only drug and cure
Leaving you is like betraying my soul
How can I forget such a distracting lure....

Yes I count your absence
When you're not with me
Grovel and crawl for that day and hour
Our soul mingling together and set free..

Written By- BASU GUPTA

Reviews

[Anita Singh]

Lovely description of emotions. So serene.

[Basu Gupta]

Glad you liked it

[Tennessee]

I like how you called her your drug and cure, as she is both and yet they contradict each other. I think that is a smart way to explain what she is to you. I enjoyed how your words flow together to almost fight each other but then come closer in the end.

[lee von cleef]

Grovel power word , I don't think you need crawl, cause I like Grovel.

[Renée]

Really enjoyed reading .. Very Sweet write about love and your need to be near this person

[Barbara Walker]

Your words reflect your intent with good rhythm and flow. Love the 4th and 5th stanzas!

[Basu Gupta]

thankew..

[Ency Bearis]

Nice metaphor - such person's love to you is like a medicine. Great poem

[Basu Gupta]

thankew.....

[Ency Bearis]

my pleasure

[Kat]

this is a wonderful poem, i really love the fourth stanza. i know how it feels when someone you love is like your only drug.. great work. :)

[Basu Gupta]

thankew.....

[Terohime]

Oh wow, this poem was great. I could see a person who loves some one deeply and could not live with out that person. My favorite sentence is "Leaving you is like betraying my soul "

That sentence really shows love and devotion. Great work.

~Your friend Res

[Basu Gupta]

thanks a lot Res..

[Inkeyes]

I love this! You can really absorb the misery

[Basu Gupta]

thanq..

[Krista Weiss]

Really great poem!! :) Loved it!

[Basu Gupta]

glad you liked it...thanq.....