A FULFILLED DESIRE

LOVE IS ADORABLE....

You always stood beside me
Sometimes holding my hand,sometimes there in my thoughts
Yet I remembered everything about you..
Without even the slightest memory lost..

Talked with you a lot
Wanted at night,wanted in day
Sleep is just felt a gap
'An evil need' I should say.....

But sometimes that too did heal my soul
When you were with me in my dreams..
7(seven) hours were increased to 9(nine)
Just to see you more in my realm....

Hate those moments when you got upset
Try to make you up,even pleaded on my knees
With an attempt to see that heart-melting smile
From your lips while you say 'cheese'.....

Though we're together for a couple of months
Yet sound of your steps makes me mad
Don't know why,but I run towards you
Even without a single second shed....

Reviews

[CookieDough]

Good poem!

[Basu Gupta]

thanq....

[Phoenix]

Nice poem

[Basu Gupta]

thanq...

[Rhianne Ney]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That's so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I always like guys who can run after girls because they want them back, but that's not all, I can't blame guys also since sometimes we, girls shouldn't be that demanding at all things and shouldn't be the only one being seeked and chased.

Nice poem though

[Basu Gupta]

ohh you've a very broad outlook...i really appreciate..
thankssssssss....

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome, though I'm not finished with the other read requests (:

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Awwwwwwwwwwww..... :D

This is cute, a very cute poem. Everything about it is cute.

You are correct love is adorable XD

This is so innocently adorable that I want to defy Logic itself and hug the poem

Nice write
:)

[Basu Gupta]

okieeeeeeee..........i should say your review made my poem much more beautiful...
thanks Katherine..

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

don't flatter me, it's all you XD and that cute poem of yours :3

[Basu Gupta]

just like you...

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

hahaha me? XD nah you're poem is more huggleworthy level of cuteness

[Basu Gupta]

sorry ma'am i quit...you're a tough contender......

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

hahahaha XD

[Sami Khalil]

A sweet poem...:)

[Basu Gupta]

thanks Sami..

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Krista Weiss]

Beautiful poem! :)

[Basu Gupta]

thankew..

[B-poet]

Very touching and sentimental. An emotional portrayal of treasuring priceless moments in time from a relationship that was once thriving yet now it's gone to soon. Excellent write. :)

[Basu Gupta]

thank you

[s y e]

Haha, love is sweet. This was sweet. Nicely written. Good job!

[Basu Gupta]

thank you

[s y e]

Welcome

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah. She got to you. They can do that

[Basu Gupta]

thank you