WHY THEY?

poem written while sitting in a park.....watching two kids playing cricket

Children are so free
From this world full of greed
Love is the thing for them
Including some prior heed.....

Though insensible are their moves
With only tenderness inside their heads
Bring not only the close ones even closer
But even join some broken ancient threads.....

Sometimes I even envy
These lovely heavenly creatures
''why they are only loved?''
I ask others with appropriate gestures.....

No one used to answer
And consider me insane
But i always seem struggling
Why everyone do the same?.....

Years rolled and rolled
But nothing came up to...
Still i preserved that question
And you think you have an answer,do you?

                                                        

Reviews

[Prritiy]

''why they are only loved?''
---
Children are so free
From this world full of greed
Love is the thing for them
Including some prior heed.....

Though insensible are their moves
With only tenderness inside their heads
Bring not only the close ones even closer
But even join some broken ancient threads.....

You answer your question yourself at the start :)

nice creation full of feelings and thoughtfulness.

best wishes

[Terohime]

This was a great read, i got into the poem. Good job keep up the good work.
~Your friend Res

[Basu Gupta]

thanxx Resnera..

[Terohime]

anytime ^^

[Krista Weiss]

Great job!

[Basu Gupta]

thanqqqqqqq

[Rhianne Ney]

The question can always be answered but that doesn't mean that everyone knows nor cares about the question at hand. And you, with your curious lens you were able to find the question but not the answer, you'll find it in the future for sure so now satisfy yourself with questions which you can come up an answer with. (:

[Basu Gupta]

but i guess that wasn't the answer to my question Rihanne...(heheh)
don't you think so?

[Rhianne Ney]

I don't know, I haven't found a question yet *puzzling look*

[Basu Gupta]

Rhianne ..it was just there...
check out the last line..

[Rhianne Ney]

Yeah, found it, I also wonder about that but you know, not everyone really wonders about it, sometimes we all go with the flow w/o questions

[Basu Gupta]

heheh....so sceptic thoughts have no existence here.....no probz here as well..

[Rhianne Ney]

:D Yeah, I agree

[Rita L. Sev]

Indeed, why must everyone do the same? An important question, especially for children. You pose the issue of what we are giving to children well - good write!

[Basu Gupta]

thanks Rita....i should better thank God that atleast you too posses the same view..

[InsanityWriter]

Children are so innocent. :) Lovely poem!

[Basu Gupta]

pretty much...thankssssss...

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

heed doesnt really make sense...cause heed means careful attention...

anyways, its cool

[Basu Gupta]

but that's what i wanted to convey....children demand nothing except love and some careful attention..i hope you got my point now..

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

yeah lol i get it now...i apologize :)

[Basu Gupta]

no no...it's completely alright..
btw thanks