THORNS FOR ME,PETALS FOR YOU

My dreams were very small

Which forced me a lot to do,

One of them was like

Thorns for me and petals for you.....

Every pain of mine disappears 

When i see your reflection

'BEAUTY' seemed inadequate to describe you

Just like an abbreviation for perfection

Drown with me 

In the depth of night

Darkness would be all around

Even your shadow will leave your flight

I promise with a pledge

I'll never leave your hand

Never be unfaithful like your shadow

Always be there as your best friend

Hoping this lonely night

To be an endless one

With me busy binding your memories

In a bag preferred for kilo's forcing the ton(s)

You won't ever know what I've done

Which even involved whispering your name at night

Just to meet you in my dreams

To further my story from love at first sight

Every single short-cum is high- lightened

Ending with a line yet i love you

What's my fault when you remember all

But nothing which really worth to...

                                                                 Written By - BASU GUPTA

Reviews

[Gareth6d]

Beautifully written! Love the darkness and the emotion.

[Basu Gupta]

thank a lott Gareth..

[Rachel Anderson]

I think my favorite part of all your poems are the titles. When I'm going through my read requests, yours are the first I read because of the titles. Good job. :)

[Basu Gupta]

thank you Rachel....you owe a great appreciation..

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

when you say 'always be their' its a bit of a grammatical mistake; 'there' would be a much better choice. Anyways, I love this poem :D

[Basu Gupta]

ohh ya yaa u're right...thanxx i really appreciate..i just gonna edit it..
thanxx again

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

:D