THORNS FOR ME,PETALS FOR YOU

My dreams were very small

Which forced me a lot to do,

One of them was like

Thorns for me and petals for you.....

Every pain of mine disappears 

When i see your reflection

'BEAUTY' seemed inadequate to describe you

Just like an abbreviation for perfection

Drown with me 

In the depth of night

Darkness would be all around

Even your shadow will leave your flight

I promise with a pledge

I'll never leave your hand

Never be unfaithful like your shadow

Always be there as your best friend

Hoping this lonely night

To be an endless one

With me busy binding your memories

In a bag preferred for kilo's forcing the ton(s)

You won't ever know what I've done

Which even involved whispering your name at night

Just to meet you in my dreams

To further my story from love at first sight

Every single short-cum is high- lightened

Ending with a line yet i love you

What's my fault when you remember all

But nothing which really worth to...

                                                                 Written By - BASU GUPTA

Reviews

[Angel]

A very pretty little love poem...

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

What an incredibly romantic poem~

Again, I find your choice of words very nice I can't really say unique but it helps you convey your message with added touches to finish it off.

I'm sorry I can't give you a lengthier review for I am bitter for love now but overall, nice poem :)

[Phantom.Bite]

I enjoy the depth you have :) I can't wait to read more of your works.

[Blissful Sin]

Touching as always!
-Bliss

[Veronica Chandler]

Adoration and pure love spilled out on page in lovely verses, I especially enjoyed these lines,
"You won't ever know what I've done
Which even involved whispering your name at night
Just to meet you in my dreams
To further my story from love at first sight"
Well done.

[Basu Gupta]

thank you ma'am.....

[Rhianne Ney]

Great lines and another twisting romantic poem, great job(I'm out of words so pardon the shortness) >o

[Basu Gupta]

thanks Rhianne...your review full of blanks is also adequate...

[Rhianne Ney]

Haha(: I don't think I should use blank reviews since it will puzzle you

[Basu Gupta]

hey! I didn't mean that...but no probz..

[Rhianne Ney]

Yeah (:

[kublakhan27]

Some really great lines in this one...you really captured that element of yearning here :)

[Basu Gupta]

ohh thanks....

[Phoenix]

Nicely done

[Basu Gupta]

thanks a lot..

[C.C. Marx]

How sweet, you heart and mind must be on good speaking terms huh? Nicely done

[Basu Gupta]

ohh thanks a lott...that's really good..

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasure lol

[s y e]

I thought this was very well written and written from the heart.

[Basu Gupta]

ya it was...straight from and with my heart...
thank you..

[s y e]

:-) You're welcome