FRIENDSHIP - AN EVER-LASTING THIRST

Outing is the best part

Teaching is the worst

That'’s what we call '‘friendship’'

An ever-lasting thirst.......

Every boundary was crossed

Without a feeling of fear

Uncountable hands would be there

To wash away the tears...

I too had a group

Which welcomed me with love

I was an innocent boy

Who now don’'t hesitate even for a pub.....

We walked in a queue

With egoistic heads and proudy chests

Every second was enjoyed

Each day was a fest

Every secret was told

With a promise like a shot

That too was exposed

Without a second thought

Expressions show a gradation

Including those of cries and smiles

Distance appeared short

Like some meters made up a mile

No one did sleep

When treats were concerned

Lot of money does spent

Like a charity for a fund

Everyone appeared insane

So as to appear cool

Deceiving was their aim

Just to make others fool

Emotions were transparent

No one seemed fake

Sacrifices were made

Just for each other’s sake

Years rolled and passed by

Walking hand in hand

Each one is precious

Like the priceless shells In the sand………..

                                                      Written By - BASU GUPTA

Reviews

[CookieDough]

Very, very beautiful! this one is the best! :)

[Rhianne Ney]

This is another romantic yet bends with friendship poem that you've got there Basu Gupta, you seem to be well experienced in this and great imagery though some lines were free and can't connect with the others.(don't mind that)

But overall, I enjoyed reading this (:

[Basu Gupta]

thanks....

[Rhianne Ney]

Welcomezz...

[kublakhan27]

You seem to have a really good grasp of relationships and how to articulate their ups and downs...another great piece.

[Basu Gupta]

thanks a lottttttttttttttt

[Phoenix]

Nicely done

[Basu Gupta]

thanq...

[Baby Ricochet]

Some good rhyming. A little forced in spots but that's okay. Keep writing

[Basu Gupta]

thank youuuu...

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

i noticed with this one again to you use 'their' instead of 'there' and maybe you should fix that up a bit...otherwise, its a really wonderful read :)

[Basu Gupta]

fixed...thanxx