INFATUATION OR OBSESSION?

My soul betrayed me
I'm completely in you
Just searching my real identity
In return I found you....

You're making me insane
You're driving me mad
but that too i'm really enjoying
Coz, it's something called 'LOVE' young lad.....

I can do everything
Without using the word 'heck'
All I need is a smile on your lips
That's adequate to repay me back....

Very cheerful was I
When you seem contended
Optimism hits me on top
Like it's my only sheer greed.....

Now My spirit is too deceiving
And is revolving around you
Nothing is felt more relevant
Than that curing smile you do......

So,to sum it all up........I really LOVE YOUUUU

                                                                 Written By - BASU GUPTA

Reviews

[♪Barklight♪]

Nice ^_^

[Talkless]

I enjoyed it,nice placement of word

[Basu Gupta]

thanks a lot..

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like that last line, straight forward emotion. A nice write. I like the title, it caught my attention. I also really like that first stanza.

[Basu Gupta]

thankewwww Victoria

[Krista Weiss]

Awesome poem! :)

[Basu Gupta]

thanq Krista..

[Leslie Philibert]

I like this, and I bet the writer feels this way...

[Basu Gupta]

thanq sir.........i really appreciate..

[Rhianne Ney]

This poem didn't impress me in maiden's terms but I find it corny and sweet, honestly, you're bombarding me with love poems (that's not a bad thing) which might help me regain all the fluff material that I need, since nowadays concentrating in Mystery makes me forget how to write something in romance and that's not something that I really appreciate to happen since I still have to hang out with that theme so great (:

[Basu Gupta]

don't worry...I'm there only...always at your service...

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks (:

[Basu Gupta]

your welcome....

[Rhianne Ney]

;D

[Phoenix]

nice job :)

[Basu Gupta]

thanq

[Baby Ricochet]

Honestly this is a mess. It's got no flow. Poetry pours like water.

[Basu Gupta]

i'm really sorry if it didn't touched your heart..
i promise i'll try to improve..

[Catheryn]

Nice ! 8D

[Basu Gupta]

10xx

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

nice job :)

[Basu Gupta]

thanxx