A SHAFT OF LIGHT IN MY DARKENED LIFE

few things can't be written..coz, my vocab is just inadequate to describe it fully...or maybe i don't want to write because it will restrict her beauty..

Gorgeous was that face
Of which I had a sight
Darkened was my life earlier
But it appeared a shaft of light....

Her gestures were fascinating
which illumined my confused mind
struggled for an appropriate word to descibe her
hours were passed to find....

Always wished her to be in my worthier arms
And i'll never let her go,
fill and embrace her tightly
just like a mountain entrapped by snow...

This world of mine appeared small
when she stood beside me
nothing feared at all
like everyone's kneeling on their respective knees...

Always hoped to describe her as 'best'
but my writings seem endless
Precious is her moments for me
more than a diamond she's priceless.....

Written by Basu Gupta

Author's Note

LOVE' ,though an abbreviation yet carries the whole meaning..everyone feels it,encounters it at some stage of his life..though characterised under a single and a common word 'LOVE' yet is different and unique for everyone..

Reviews

[chaotic katie]

i loved the imagery and emotion in this piece, beautifully written fantastic job!

[InsanityWriter]

Very well done. :) I liked it. ^_^

[LadySoDivine]

Really well written! Love really can make you a better and happier person. Good job, keep writing! :)

[Basu Gupta]

thanq.....

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

It is a good write and love the theme. Excellent structure. But some lines need to spin up in syntax. Overall it is an honest brilliant work..

[Basu Gupta]

thanks a lot Marc....

[Veronica Chandler]

Very nicely written Basu; Some of the best poets in the world have tried to capture this thing called "Love" in poetic verse and I doubt if one of them feels they have ever really quite captured the essence of it.

[Basu Gupta]

thanks a lotttttt ma'am.......it really meant a lot..

[Phoenix]

Keep writing

[Basu Gupta]

yes......thanq

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Aww it's really entertaining, reading all your poems of love like this. It's so... I don't know it awakens the girly side of me that wants me to squeal like crazy.

This is a nice write. I don't have much to say other than that but good luck with this lucky lady of yours :D

Nice write~

[Basu Gupta]

thanks a tonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.....this review of your's really made me happy....

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

aww glad to help make a smile once in a while

[Basu Gupta]

ya sure...

[Rhianne Ney]

You're really love sick, dude. Good for the girl for having someone like you (:

[Basu Gupta]

thanxx a lot...

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[Baby Ricochet]

This one's kind of all over the place. It needs to be tightened up on the flow.

[Basu Gupta]

I'll surely add this to my account...
Thank You..

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

what a lovely piece of writing :D

[Basu Gupta]

thanxx