A DREAM IN THE BROAD DAYLIGHT

A DREAM IN THE BROAD DAYLIGHT

The Crush(s) I Have Always Break A List

With Your Name On Top

As My Ever-Lasting Wish….

The Echoes Of Your Voice

Always Revolves Around My Head

Without Remembering Anything Else

Like A Tree In Autumn

With It's Leaves All Shed..

I Wish Someday You'll Realize That

Hiding My Pain Is Like A Bald Man

Covering His Head By A Transparent Hat..

My Life Always Trespassed The Seamy Side,

 They Often Broke Me Up, But I Still Never Got Horrified...

But The Day I Had Seen you With Another Boy Walking Hand In Hand

My Heart Really Ached And I Even Cried....

You Won't Ever Know What My Love Has Forced Me to Do...

Many of My Password Protected Id's

And Accounts Have A Similar Key .i.e., you..

The Days are Tiring And Hectic Without You..

Like Life Is A Labour And The World Seemed A Hell...

People Think That My Verses Are Imaginary

But I Really Abhor The Day When I Fell..

Nobody Seems Valuable In My Life..

The Parents,The Friends All Are Forgotten..

Only Thinking Of You All Day Long..

 I Don't Know How My Virtues Got So Much Shorten..

Don’t Know How to Overcome My Pain

Yet Covered A Couple of Miles

Living My Life As a Debt

I've Forgotten How to Smile…..

Please Come Back To Me

As Intense Pain Is Difficult To Hide

It's Like An Armed And A Strong Soldier

Fighting For The Lost Side……

The Nights Are Getting Darker And Darker

And I’m Getting More than Worse

Just Waiting For The Day to Die

to End Up This Gloomy Curse…….

But Now I’m Thinking  of Moving On

Accompanying With A Fear

That I’m Completely Wrong..

Her Love Only Possessed The Power for Me to Cure..

But I Know It's A Dream

Which Is ,Which Is For Sure..

Author's Note

THANK YOU FOR VIEWING
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Reviews

[Phoenix]

sincerely enjoyed the sentiment

[Basu Gupta]

i'm glad you enjoyed....thanks

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

There was a line that made me laugh and this is it:
Hiding My Pain Is Like A Bald Man
Covering His Head By A Transparent Hat..

I like this. I kept reading your poem but still I went back just to read this line XD

After reading your love poems I'm sad that this is a heartbroken one. Did things not work out? D: Though I guess there isn't love without heartbreak, they say. I cannot fully comment on that matter though being a child and all that.

Anyway I love this poem as it brings an intensity of your feelings but has what they call comic relief also so good job

[Basu Gupta]

thanks Katherine

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

you're welcome

[Veronica Chandler]

Your piece exudes the desperate sadness of a love no longer returned, and the ache is palpable. Well done and you have clearly written this pain and sadness which left to itself can consume even the strongest of people.

[Basu Gupta]

thanks a lot ma'am.......

[Blue Belle]

It's so sad and a wonderful poem.

[Basu Gupta]

thanq......

[Rhianne Ney]

Ey, are you heart sick now you seem to be heatbroken

[Basu Gupta]

nopezz....it was just a stretch ..ordeal stage of my life..
now it's completely all set..tonn....

btw thanks a

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome, but being able to write such a thing is also awesome

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

THIS WAS AWESOME! Great Job :D

[Basu Gupta]

thank you ..

[Salar Majak]

(Hiding My Pain Is Like A Bald Man
Covering His Head By A Transparent Hat..)
this made me laugh, great romance you show in this peice, beautiful! really beautiful i liked it and it made me smile keep up!!! we want more!!!
Sal.

[Basu Gupta]

thankew for viewing..i really appreciate....i'll be greatly thankful if you can view my other poems too and help me in this fascinating poetry field....
Thank You

[Salar Majak]

:) it is amazing, the field of poetry! and you enjoy it so much once you sink within it!
of course i'll be glad too!!

[Baby Ricochet]

Great job

[Basu Gupta]

thanx for viewing....i really appreciate and please i'll be really thankful if you can guide me in this amazing poetry line..

[amarlaksh]

quite good keep writing