A DREAM IN THE BROAD DAYLIGHT

A DREAM IN THE BROAD DAYLIGHT

The Crush(s) I Have Always Break A List

With Your Name On Top

As My Ever-Lasting Wish….

The Echoes Of Your Voice

Always Revolves Around My Head

Without Remembering Anything Else

Like A Tree In Autumn

With It's Leaves All Shed..

I Wish Someday You'll Realize That

Hiding My Pain Is Like A Bald Man

Covering His Head By A Transparent Hat..

My Life Always Trespassed The Seamy Side,

 They Often Broke Me Up, But I Still Never Got Horrified...

But The Day I Had Seen you With Another Boy Walking Hand In Hand

My Heart Really Ached And I Even Cried....

You Won't Ever Know What My Love Has Forced Me to Do...

Many of My Password Protected Id's

And Accounts Have A Similar Key .i.e., you..

The Days are Tiring And Hectic Without You..

Like Life Is A Labour And The World Seemed A Hell...

People Think That My Verses Are Imaginary

But I Really Abhor The Day When I Fell..

Nobody Seems Valuable In My Life..

The Parents,The Friends All Are Forgotten..

Only Thinking Of You All Day Long..

 I Don't Know How My Virtues Got So Much Shorten..

Don’t Know How to Overcome My Pain

Yet Covered A Couple of Miles

Living My Life As a Debt

I've Forgotten How to Smile…..

Please Come Back To Me

As Intense Pain Is Difficult To Hide

It's Like An Armed And A Strong Soldier

Fighting For The Lost Side……

The Nights Are Getting Darker And Darker

And I’m Getting More than Worse

Just Waiting For The Day to Die

to End Up This Gloomy Curse…….

But Now I’m Thinking  of Moving On

Accompanying With A Fear

That I’m Completely Wrong..

Her Love Only Possessed The Power for Me to Cure..

But I Know It's A Dream

Which Is ,Which Is For Sure..

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Renée]

oh...what a sweet poem of that first crush/love! it is consuming !

[Rachel]

a great poem. really liked this a lot.

[Basu Gupta]

thanq Rachle..

[Zoya]

i liked the poem....
really i could get the feeling....
soooooooooooooooooo gud
congrats !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

[Basu Gupta]

thanxx zoya....

[Zoya]

:)

[Talkless]

Very exclusive pieces of writing

[Basu Gupta]

thanq

[Talkless]

Very exclusive pieces of writing

[Fréyjä Helv..]

"Many of My Password Protected Id's
And Accounts Have A Similar Key .i.e., you.." Yah don't use your crushes or girlfriends name as passwords or account i.ds. S**t happens.

Anyways, this is very well written. It was joy to read writings like these. In times of pain, you don't see moving on as an easy option, but it's the only reasonable option there is. Everyone goes through that. Most of them move on and these are the lucky ones. 'cause once your over that pain, things will be better. It does get better. Everything has an end to it, even pain. So don't go over pessimistic and do something stupid.

[Basu Gupta]

thanq

[jerrypat]

Moving on seem like a good thing to do. We sometimes like to hang on much too long, because our feelings are hurt, or we are so desperately in love we can see no other way but to continue on with what amounts to begging. Yes, moving on would be a good thing.

[Basu Gupta]

thanq...

[Aellø]

"Many of My Password Protected Id's
And Accounts Have A Similar Key .i.e., you..", I love this line, very nice poem :)

[Just Kim]

Love this one, simply amazing.

[CookieDough]

AMAZING! So lovely. I like the poem.

[Basu Gupta]

thankuuuu