Love Auction

Love Auction

A Poem by Raymond
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The title explains all :)

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Love is like an auction

When you see that special one you want, you make yourself noticed and to place a bid

When someone else wants what you want, they begin to bid as well

 

This, however, ends in a battle as the bids keep going up

One side tries to impress the one you love

The other tries to raise the bar

Then comes the desire

 

Which one wants what they desire more?

When do you call it quits?

Only you will know because when you find the right one

She will be priceless

You will never stop bidding until you have what you want

 

 

© 2012 Raymond


Author's Note

Raymond
1. These are just my thoughts on how an auction can be like love
2. Women/Men are NOT objects, let's make that clear
3. Any constructive criticism would seriously be appreciated

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Added on August 13, 2012
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Raymond
Raymond

Eastlake, OH



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