Beowuf

Beowulf

 

After a long scary night

he survived from a long fight

and started wondering through the woods

where silence was not good

then life pumped through the trees

and asked him about his lost dreams

 

The stars seemed to be falling

from the sky that seemed to be calling

for someone to wake him up

to save what he've got

he still have the chance

before his last death's dance

 

through his life he strugled a lot

someone like him deserved a 2nd shot

but where he goes he find failure

he should have moved somehow earlier

but now he doesn't know

where should he go

 

He never had a smile on his face

measuring every step he trace

and in the night when the moon rises

everything inside him dies

to be a new one with new soul

thirsty for blood to reach his goals

 

And after all what he've been through

still scared untill he had grew

to find all his responsibilities

running out of his abilities

forgot all about his rights

was he wrong or was he right ?!!

 

and after all what he had done

hard working to reach the sun

life seemed to be boring

all these memories he's storing

but suddenly he will blow

to show what he wanted to show

from a long time ago

 

Everybody seemed to be careless

moving him like a piece of chess

but he had too much inside

no body knew about his other side

he is too evil but not showing

his firing heart started glowing

 

He never had a smile on his face

measuring every move he trace

and in the night when the moon rise

everything inside him dies

to be a new one with new soul

thirsty for blood to reach his goals

he is a Beowulf

he took the mask off ... he is a Beowulf

Reviews

[Octob3r Star]

sweet :)

[QuietPoet]

This was good. You had great details in this. Great job :)

[Taylor H.]

decription was great! :) liked it

[R J Askew]

Like being lost in some romantic dream where things never quiet work out. Of course this has happened many times in history and there have been millions upon millions of Beowulf's. So many would probably see themselves in your lines.

[deeps]

A very descriptive write and creative. I like this. Thought it had an amazing flow. enjoyable read.

[Katie]

This was really creative and descriptive. I loved the book so of course I love this poem. I like how the emphasis was put solely on Beowulf. Great job!