The Fear

every one of us has some fears that he tries to hide, fears from facing people or from demons or something....but its always there waiting for you !!

The Fear

 

it made us blind,controled our minds

if you dig deep inside you will find

the same fear as mine

 

you're never safe never alone

fear is your company even at home

you started a game you're in the middle of a war

there's no way out , you closed the door

but through your fears you must fight

splitt up your light

to face your fears

 

fear is the way we feal

it's the way we deal

it's the way we escape from our fears

 

try to escape in the darkest nights

from your fear and scary sights

dry your tears and try

escaping isn't the right way

but through your fears you must fight

and splitt up your light

to face your fears

 

fear is the way we feal

it's the way we deal

it's the way we escape from our fears

 

it made us blind, controled our minds

if you dig deep inside you'll find

the same fear as mine

Author's Note

hi....i wish you enjoyed my poem
best wishes bassem ashraf

Reviews

[Encore]

I could definitely relate to every aspect of this poem. However, you made a few innocent grammar mistakes, so you may want to go through and edit this a bit.

Good job, I enjoyed this.

[R J Askew]

It is true, fear is the same. Most of us do not realise this. And it true that fear -- the flight reaction -- does save us from the things we fear. Fear has it's place. How wld we be without fear? Imagining a world without fears is fascinationg. Wld we be super-aggressive, with each having no restraint? Or wld we all be much happire as, with nothing to fear, we might actually get on with each other? I don't suppose we will ever find out as fear seems to be an essential part of us. Maybe minimising it is the best we can hope for. I like the way your poem makes me think.

[A]

Great poem! Written very well and kept my interest. :)

[Katie]

This is really well written! I love how it paints an imagine in my mind. It gave me goose bumps!!

[Minnow]

makes me think of all my fears. Your a great writer =)

[deeps]

Wow! I found this simply amazing
Wonderful way with words
Very well written. I can feel this write.

[Amor-de-angel]

I really liked it, how many of us have felt that fear? great job.

[QuietPoet]

This was great. I enjoyed this. I could feel your emotion. Everyone has fears, its good to face them. But this was awesome.

[Tarekrahil]

aywa ya bassem..fi nas katbeen ahom. koooooooooool. Great job.

[Sseoni]

Wonderful poem! Very emotional and moving! It was very well written, greatly detailed and descriptive! Fantastic poem! :D