Story

Story

A Poem by Immortal

I've heard this story before,
a girl who thinks shes a downright bore,
playing all the saddest cards,
her head among the moon and stars.

Well she isnt i say,
to the bright of day,
with her head among the stars,
it's her thoughts that should be ours.

Sometimes it repeats,
waking forth from a fitful sleep,
with the thoughts that should be ours,
disappears once more into the half-light hours.

From dusk till dawn,
I hear her thoughts once more
from the juvenile thoughts of bed-time lore,
but wait. 

I've heard this story before.

© 2010 Immortal


Author's Note

Immortal
This was an entry for a contest. Shh.

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very nice ly done

Posted 13 Years Ago


THis is great..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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