Song- Do I take your Breath away?

They dont have a song option so Im putting it under a poem. I wrote it after I spent 10 minutes trying to remember some of the 20 minute version I ad libbed.

What more is there to say?

Do I still take your breath away?

Is your smile real or fake?

Chorus: Would you walk with me

   Your hand in Mine together, together.

Would you trust your life with me,

Let me lead with no need to see.

The road ahead is unwritten.

Do you see, Do you see with me?

Or are we worlds apart?

Can you still Trust me to lead?

Chorus

Did you know there is more?

That all is fair in love and war.

I can see through your disguise.

There is still one thing left to say.

Babe, you still take my breath away.

I can tell if your smile is real or fake.

Chorus

You talk away, I don't hear a thing.

I just sit here, twisting a ring.

Thoughts come and go.

Gone like you, Gone like the wind.

I can't hear you above this din.

Silent Voices fill my head.

Chorus

I quietly sing to you,

with a passion through and through.

With a flame burning bright.

What more is there to say?

Do I still take your breath away?

Is your smile real or fake?

Author's Note

This is played on an acoustic 6-string guitar with a slow-ish tempo.

Reviews

[hmm]

This is amazing! I really enjoyed this I thought it was quite the lovely song write.

[Immortal]

I would record it and youtubify it, but I don't like the way my own voice sounds through recordings.

[NinjaPi]

I can almost here the music. I would love to here it played. You have a gift for poetry not just song writing. You use some very powerful metaphors and it gives you poetry such life. Very nice

[Lilly]

This is really beautiful - I'm sure it is even more amazing with the music

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is really good, excellent