Frozen Souls

Two souls frozen in time
my heart is yours and yours is mine

Sweet kisses, long strolls
longing to hear of storied told

Cathedral NOLA music and art
I knew you forever from the very start

When I wake up from this dream, delusion might it be, fate will be told if these blind eyes may see
-BMB2017

Reviews

[Gee]

What's for ya sure won't pass ya by Barbara. Your Prince will come one day, as sure as eggs are eggs and before your life is ova...psst, see what I did there. 2017, the year of smiley Barbara, remember..

[Barbara Borel]

Thank you🤗🤗🤗🤗

[Tony Jordan]

I think 'fate will tell...' would scan a bit better Barbara since fate usually is the one that does the 'telling'.
I loved the line ~
'I knew you forever from the very start'...'

:)

[Barbara Borel]

Fate will tell. It does flow better

[Valentine]

The last line explains the hope in the first 2 lines. Valentine

[Barbara Borel]

It's a chaotic dance in my head . Yes no real delusion . A planned life that may never manifest