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Let go

Let go

A Poem by Barbara Borel
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Sorry Im in a dark place right now

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Let him go and breath. Your being choked by every musical finger.

No one cares and never will. Your alone... stay that way. Quit being tough and shrivel up in the ball of pathetic blackness that you so long to be.

There is no comparison. Your not them. You never will be. Your you. The fat ugly monster we all so love and adore.

You will never be choosen you. You won't even choose yourself. Stay in the black pit. The light is not coming. It's over. Cease your breath... just go.... let it go ... let go.

© 2016 Barbara Borel


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This is poem is intense, dark, morbid and beautiful. The fat ugly monster we all love: wow give me more lines like that. POWERFUL

Posted 8 Years Ago


Barbara Borel

8 Years Ago

Wow yes thank you. Sometimes the beast is the best writer

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Added on December 23, 2016
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Barbara Borel
Barbara Borel

Metairie , LA



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Born and raised in New Orleans. Use words as a way of expressing myself. I dont write for an audience or to get praise or please anyone. Writing is therapy. In my eyes expressing words in paper... th.. more..

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A Poem by Barbara Borel