The void in me

The void in me

A Poem by -Batata

I know,

I was there

I saw the great chasm in you,

the drastic chaos in you

and you saw mine.

© 2017 -Batata


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Short but packs a punch.
Lovers at the edge of each others abyss.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The title was what caught my attention and the content enhanced the effect! This was short but carries great depth within.. Whether the voids would be filled or not is the question, I think.. Nicely penned 👍

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This quick run has beautiful and profound sentiment to it. The depths and differences between two people is what it is all about. Nice!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 2, 2017
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-Batata
-Batata

Morocco



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