YOUR FLOWER

I'am never out of sight 

And many shall not see

When i'am a gift or a tool

Then some remembers me

You'll hear how i'am so distinguished 

From writers and famous poets 

Some never gave us water 

And hasn't give us yet

For all your ceremonies

Events and even death 

When the festivals are over 

Some remember to forget 

Exploited of our beauty 

And natural embellishment 

Products for big industries 

Of humongous establishments 

Never forget the symbol of the queen 

For without can be born no king

When the flower meets a honest bee

we've got to keep the sting 

 

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Sweet, eloquent poem reminding us that however harsh life becomes, there is always beauty to be revered. Lovely imagery, form, flow, cadence and rhyme. Much talent here. Kudos!

[Jason Baptiste]

Greetings Annette Pisano Higley So deeply appreciated Haven't written any thing for a while and i really love writing Thanks for your precious time truly appreciated and very inspiring and encouraging keep awesome

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

........:))!

[BlackPrince]

I love the rhythm, flow and simple and effective rhyme scheme.
I love how you used flower as a symbol to point out to the bigger things in life.

WELL DONE

[Jason Baptiste]

Greetings Black Prince Thanks for your precious time and inspired review Deeply appreciated Really trying hard to improve Its such an honor to be amongst the best and enjoy being here to meet people like you that help make this site truly special Happy New Year 2018 and beyond