BATTLE FILLED RAINBOW

In the sky where a rainbow 

Shaped like semicircle 

Arched the different colors 

Battles of each others 

Fighting to control 

Mythical pots of gold 

From the skies blood had rained 

Washing joy into pain

Red was fighting with blue

Green and yellow did to 

Upon the lands where they've dropped 

Black and white hadn't stop

Arrived a surprise they'll get

Immediately entered a purple sunset

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

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[Jason Baptiste]

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