Judgement Day

Who is better, really? He or she? You or I? 

The girl that has never experienced fear, or hate 

Or the boy deciding which wallet to take 

The man who splurges on women and wine, or the one who sees no indifference to crime The girl who sells the only thing she has Or the man paying for her 14 year old a*s Gluttony, Sloth, Pride, Lust , Envy....Wrath and Greed 

It Awes me to think we have planted a seed 

Where sin is accepted.....turn on your tv 

Desensitization grows rapidly within you and me 

We no longer know wrong from right, evil from pure 

Cancer is evil, but they`ve found a cure 

Do you expect things to change? Honestly open your eyes 

LOSE YOUR DENIAL, HEAR THE WORLD`S CRIES....

Reviews

[hdc]

well done,it flows nicely

[BansheeGirl]

Thank you
I enjoy reading this one out loud, that being rare for me

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I love the voice in this. It seems to be one raised in pain and anger at one and the same time. You have set out in this hard hitting expose, a pen portrait of how as a society we have become desensitised to things that would have been seen as taboo decades ago. The reach of the internet and the ready availability of information and images has caused this. The demand for imediate gratification and the fact the corporations and money grabbers depend on feeding us in order to strip out revenue from advertising even more stuff to us. Will it end? Good question.

[HB Rita]

It's wonderful poem. It's a big question about equality of a MAN and WOMAN.

[BansheeGirl]

Not really meant to be about gender equality, so much as sin equality
Tough one though...I know I'm guilty of judging others based on my own personal moral totem pole

[HB Rita]

You are not wrong. You are unique. I like your flow.