The Cold Snap

The Cold Snap

A Story by Bannedfrom7
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A story about a sudden cold snap

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It’s the middle of October where the leaves start falling, and the tree’s colors start to vary, and the animals prepare for hibernation. The stores filled with coats, and the grocery stores filled with hot products, and the home department stores filled with heaters are all packed with people from all around the country to prepare for the winter. It was a busy day to prepare for the cold front, unfortunately mother nature decided to send it out early.

The wind blows towards the city as the birds shiver through the breezing wind, and the leaves blow into everyone’s faces, and the rats tremble inside the sewers, and the people struggle to walk against the current, and the stores already filled with people are even more packed by everyone else sheltering themselves from the strong wind.

“Woah!” said the child, and “Eep!” said the woman running into the store without her jacket, and “Augh, I gotta get in my car!” said the shivering man who was struggling to get in the car by jamming the classic car keys inside the classic keyhole.

As years passed and passed, and the earth kept turning and turning, the cold snap kept coming earlier and earlier as the weather grew crazier and crazier. It seemed that mother nature had enough of its children.

It’s the middle of October where the leaves start falling, the tree’s colors start to vary, and the animals prepare for hibernation. The stores filled with coats, the grocery stores filled with hot products, and the home department stores filled with heaters are all packed with people from all around the country to prepare for the winter. It was a busy day to prepare for the cold front, unfortunately mother nature decided to send it out early.

The wind blows towards the city as the birds shiver through the breezing wind, the leaves blow into everyone’s faces, the rats tremble inside the sewers, the people struggle to walk against the current, and the stores already filled with people are even more packed by everyone else sheltering themselves from the strong wind.

“Woah!” said the child!

“Eep!” said the woman running into the store without her jacket!

“Augh, I gotta get in my car!” said the shivering man who was struggling to get in the car by jamming the classic car keys inside the classic keyhole.

As years passed and passed, the earth kept turning and turning, the cold snap kept coming earlier and earlier as the weather grew crazier and crazier. It seemed that mother nature had enough of its children.

© 2021 Bannedfrom7


Author's Note

Bannedfrom7
There’s 2 versions of the same story. One with polysyndetons and the other with antysyndetons

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