Unbroken

I'm just trying new ideas here.

                                         Broken Heart.
                 
             Broken Dreams.
                         
                                                            Broken Home.
       
                                                Broken Faith.
                               
                                    Broken Promises.
                
                                                    Broken Spirit.
                             
                        Broken Relationship.
  
                                      Broken Pockets.

                 All these things were broken under pressure trying to leave him in bind,
               One thing that remains strong, free and unbroken is his unbreakable mind.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very strong use of words led to strong ending. A unbreakable mind is needed. Thank you Lenard for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Viet Pham]

This poem is so simple, and yet so beautiful, all packaged inside 16 words and 2 sentences. I'm glad to be able to call you a friend

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[Emily]

Raw, fractured, and broken open. nicely written and well portrayed. Hopefully the mind can figure out a way to stay strong while he puts it all back together...

Ps. Thanks for your review, sorry it took me so long to return the favor!

[Angela]

Once again, Lenard, gritty and wonderful. My favorite kind!

[Victoria Scott]

I had no idea, before I read this, that you could right poems in such a way. (Im still young, much to learn) I found it interesting, and kind of fun :) The words were powerful and even though it was simplistic, it was meaningful, well done :D

[lovejulez03]

I enjoyed this very much! I found it so simple and direct that it was sooo refreshing! The approach was delightful. Very good!

[Gone]

Awesome. I love your direct approach to poetry. Powerful strong and clear! Brilliant.

[Lenard L. Banks III]

Honestly, let me know what you think of this new poem??