The Feel

NEWLY REVISED! This poem was written because I always see young women who feel ugly inside and out and NEED a man at all times. Whether it's you or someone else is not a issue, she just needs any man.

She just doesn’t love you or me, she loves anybody,

she doesn’t just love my hands in particularly,

she loves any man hand that washes away her insecurities.

 

She loves the kisses that are like stamps on her official

beauty certificate leaving her satisfied and certified.

 

She loves the strong slow strokes that plunges out

the filth of her self hatred that’s been floating in

her like a clogged porcelain toilet bowl,

she love the attention any man gives her that distract

her from analyzing her darken bottomless hole.

 

She loves the way a man lifts the weight of the world off her… easily like it was as light as a feather,she doesn’t love my arms she love any man arms that holds her broken confidence and soul together.

 

His sexually intense bedroom eyes she seen from a far drew her nearer, until his eyes became her vanity mirror.The sexually charge pheromones that any man release, allows her feelings of being non important to cease.

 

His hot breath on her naked neck inspired her spirit

to sing a ancient love song,the feel of  his vibrant heart beat across her chest was strong, it gives her heart encouragement to beat on.

 

In her mind she wishes every orgasm would last, for every second she’s in ecstasy her hurtful reality is in the past. Out of all the men she slept with one became love ill, because he found out that she doesn’t love him sincerely real, she doesn’t love “him” she ONLY loves the way “any man” makes her feel.

                  -Solo_N_Sincere-

 

 

 

Author's Note

NEWLY REVISED! This poem was written because I always see young women who feel ugly inside and out and NEEDS a man at all times. Whether it's you or someone else is not a issue, she just needs any man.

Reviews

[Lenard L. Banks III]

Please read my poem that I just Revised it's much better then before...enjoy

[highthought]

i know that one part of the writer job is to describ, giving solution or even trying to do that also could be a part of the job

[2Real2BTrue]

You've put into writing exactly the way I feel inside sometimes. Desperate, insecure. You have a unique style- I've never read another poem like this one before. Thumbs up.

[Gone]

I like the compassion you show for the 'type' (for want of better wording) of woman many men use and abuse for their own selfish pleasure excusing their actions by trashing the womans morals. You look deeper to the wounds inside which fuel the vicious circle that lock her into actions which provide a tempory fix but end up just adding more fuel to the fire. excellent poem

[EmpressPoetess]

You've made millions of young women happy by writing this poem. It's simply terrific and sends a tender, inspiring message to young girls to be happy with who you are, we're all beautiful in some way! We need more men who think like this!

[Veramor]

Amazing poem! very honest and beautifully written with a strong massage and a delicate issue. the image drives the massage home even more. Good read :)

[Holly O'Brien]

Very interesting perspective!! You may have definitely captured some serious reasoning behind so many women reckless behavior. I'm sure a lot of females do feel this way for real. I love the way you presented this, the rhyme scheme and metaphors in particular were my favorite features. But, the message behind it all is a strong one...as a person lacks love of themselves, they surely lack the ability to truly love another (healthily). Good write!!

[Angela]

I don't know what it is about your writing, but I am simply in awe. What an amazing insight. Thank you God, I could have so easily been this woman and for a short while was. Absolutely INCREDIBLE. Saving another one for tomorrow, or I will be on emotional overload!