Shattered Reflection

Overcoming insecurities tied to self-image by metaphorically breaking the mirror of doubt and embracing inner strength and self-acceptance.

 In shadows deep where fears reside,

 A mirror reflects what we cannot hide. 

 If your insecurities lie in what you see, 

 Break it and eat it, set yourself free.

 

 Shattered shards of doubt and fear, 

 Consume them all, let them disappear.

 For in the broken glass, you'll find,

 A strength reborn, a liberated mind.

 No longer bound by reflections’ lies, 

 You rise above, your spirit flies.

 With each piece swallowed, power grows, 

 In the ruins of the past, a new you glows.

 Embrace the change, embrace the night, 

 For through the darkness comes the light.

 If your insecurities lie in what you see, 

 Break it and eat it, and simply be.

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Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Sometimes a write becomes cathartic in its essence; helping the writer fathom and navigate their emotions to a place of healing. This seems like such a write. I enjoyed the read.

[Betty Hermelee]

When in the deep shadows of sorrow there is pain in yourself which you must release in order to become enlightened once more……free yourself from lies and fears…once you’ve been reborn…. Your strength will help out of the dark abyss
Thank you for sharing
Warmly,, B🌷..

[Mystical Ink]

Thank you for taking the time to connect with my poem and for sharing your inspiring thoughts.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome
Warmly, B🌷

[Poetic_Vixen]

This poem is an evocative idea of introspection and saving one's own soul and free it of the shackles it seems or it is shown by others, absolutely love the raw idea of 'eating up your insecurities that you see' there is strong encouragement here, to lift oneself, love the strength this poem is depicting and it's boldy expressed in your rhymes, truly am glad to read this poem as so many would have been, this poem lifts a heart, it's warming and adrenaline inducing that there is nothing one can't overcome, our world starts changing when we start changing, loved this poem dear fellow poet!

[Mystical Ink]

I'm truly touched by your deep understanding of the poem's themes and the strength it aims to convey. Your reflections add so much value to my work. Thanks a lot!

[Poetic_Vixen]

You're very welcome!

[Relic]

Whenever I write a rhyming poem I try to keep the syllable count in a strict pattern. Although the counts here vary, the poem still flows effortlessly. The message is inspiring to say the least. I love the metaphors you've used in this too. This is top notch writing. Bravo, High Priestess. :)

[Mystical Ink]

Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful feedback. Your appreciation for the metaphors and the poem’s inspiring message means a lot. It’s always a joy to know that one’s words can connect with and inspire others.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your thoughts and logic.
" Embrace the change, embrace the night,
For through the darkness comes the light.
If your insecurities lie in what you see,
Break it and eat it, and simply be.
The above lines. We must become. Like what we do, like our face. Thank you dear poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mystical Ink]

Thank you so much for your thoughtful and inspiring review. Your interpretation of my poem and the emphasis on embracing change and overcoming insecurities deeply resonate with the message I hoped to convey.

I'm truly grateful for your kind words and the time you took to share your reflections. It’s heartening to know that the poem connected with you in such a meaningful way. Your feedback encourages me to keep writing and sharing my work.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear poet. I enjoyed your work.