Bullets

Bullets

A Poem by Bane

The hammer falls

The powder ignites

A significant end to an insignificant fight

It wasn’t for money

It wasn’t for food

It wasn’t for honor

Or to prove what’s good

A point of a finger

An exchanging of looks

A misunderstanding

That’s all it took

It took a life

So pure and so new

Naïve of the world

And the evil it brews

All gone in a second

A flash and a pop

An explosion of violence that no one could stop

All over nothing

Wrong time and wrong place

The cut of your jacket

The look on your face

A life brought to end

By a coward so bold

Fear loaded the rounds

In the weapon he holds

A click of the trigger is all that it took

All over nothing

A misunderstanding

A jacket

A look

© 2013 Bane


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A well written poem full of truthful words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


wonderful flow,words very well put
title caught my attention
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this. It had awesome flow and an all to common truth to its premise. Good Job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 18, 2013
Last Updated on February 18, 2013
Tags: gun, murder, death, senseless

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Bane
Bane

Jacksonville, FL



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I used to write a lot in high school, short stories, poems, etc, and fell out of it for a number of years. Recently started writing poetry again and I'm looking for opinions on my new work. more..

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