Never Spoken

I have ideas
All the same
An endless loop
A thoughtless game
My intellect
Intelligence
Borders on irrelevance
These words and thoughts
Deep within
Remain hidden
Beneath the skin
Unable to express these thoughts
A constant losing battle fought
An uphill climb to express
The thoughts within
Only distress
It seems so clear in my head
These things that need to be said
But they fester deep within
Never spoken
My only sin

Reviews

[Hatchling]

Beautiful poem

[Bridgette's Ink]

I don't know how you do it. You write in such simplicity, yet it's still very vivid with amazing imagery. The flow is so flawless every time and your poetry is always packed tight with raw emotion. I agree this would be perfect read aloud. I really admire your work, and I'm trying to learn from it.

[Bane]

Literally grinning ear to ear from this review!

[Eileenws]

I really liked this poem and I like the fact that you changed the lengths of the lines as you wrote the poem. It should be read aloud. Maybe an open mike. Nicely done. Eileen

[Bane]

I have entertained the idea of reading at an open mic, just haven't mustered the courage to do so yet. Thank you.

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

that was an amazing poem! all your word choices had feeling and meaning, which in my opinion makes a great poem. Well done!

[Bane]

Thank you so much!