looking up

looking up

A Poem by Lauren.!

When you look up in the sky,

All you see are clouds.

They float slowly by,

as you wonder where they go.

 

What could be up there?

The Anwser to this question,

We do not know.

Use your imagination.

 

Mystical things,

Like monsters,

or Faries,

If you wish it.

 

Or Simple things,

Like Planes,

Jets,

or helicopters.

 

So when you look up at the sky,

Think of all the things,

That could be passing you by.

 

 

© 2009 Lauren.!


Author's Note

Lauren.!
Ignore gammar/ spelling problems

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gosh, lauren! this is really great! i love how you give the reader the choice of deciding what they see or beilieve in the sky. too many writers now only give like, one thing to describe in the sky, like god or whatever. i like yours way better :)

"So when you look up at the sky,
Think of all the things,
That could be passing you by."

i love that part. it makes me think of all kinds of people looking up at the sky, thinking about all the people they might meet and things they might do, you know? great poem, lauren :D

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Lauren.!

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Hey, im Lauren. You can say im kind of a nerd but im ok with that. Im not so popular around my school but i have some really close friends. Yeah people tease me about writing but lets just see who lau.. more..

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