My glimpse of light

I was born without...

But I knew I had...

I grow up Knowing...

But I didn't feel it...

I reached that feeling

I loved it... I wanted it..

But it can never happen...

Now I have it...But I'm lost...

Getting so close... But still far away

A glimpse of light that lives with me 

Struggling to stay for a longer time

Kept hidden deep inside....

To time allow it again...

It will stay hidden...

Reviews

[RBrmdz]

I love the how strong and captivating the begginning is. I had a little bit of trouble with the the part that said "i reached it" to the line that said "but still so far" i read that particular part a few times to try and understand. Overall its relatable and really good.

[abualkhair]

Thank you for your visit and your comment I'm glad you liked it.
The part that said "i reached it" to the line that said "but still so far" I mean here the the thing that I was talking about in the first two stanzas.
From the first stanza to the fourth I was describing my feelings regarding something in different stages in my life.
I hope this help you.

[RBrmdz]

ok I see how it changed at different stages. I really enjoyed this piece.

[Virtue Jackson]

That was a nice read. I can relate.
This is something I can read myself every day to remember that hope can keep us going if we let it.

[abualkhair]

Thank you, I do believe that we can't survive without it.

[RBrmdz]

reread and it sounds much clearer now I get the point you were making much better now. love this one.

[abualkhair]

Thank you, I'm really glad that you liked it