Life without You

To get the best effects of the poem you have to look at these pictures, "most beautiful places in the world" links. A single picture would never do in my opinion.

 Most beautiful places in the World.

"Life without You"

Life is so beautifully, wonderfully grand,

from the stars in the heavens, to the pyramids in the sands.

The mountains, valleys, rivers, and seas,

Earths breathtaking beauty, just captivates me.

As I look at the pictures, wide eyed and amazed,

my heart has been covered with a serene glaze.

While astonishing visions pair with overwhelming emotions,

I wonder if your love carries some magical potions?

For as exciting and thrilling as they make me feel,

they're nothing compared to how you make my heart squeal.

While mesmerized by their beauty and blessed by their grace,

not one single place holds a candle to the allure of your face.

The curves of your body, like waves in the seas,

your eyes hold my gaze, like the mountains hold trees.

Your touch leaves great feelings, spine-tingling sensations,

better than any other of Gods great creations.

So before that I die, one thing I must do,

Is make sure that I never, live Life without You.

-BB

 Most beautiful places in the World

Author's Note

To get the best effects of the poem you have to look at these pictures, "most beautiful places in the world" links. A single picture would never do in my opinion.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Nature is beautiful and its beauty is further enhanced by love. The colors appear brighter, the breeze softer and gentler and the lights brilliant. You bring out the divine side of love so well with the following lines:

"Your touch leaves great feelings, spine-tingling sensations,

better than any other of Gods great creations.

So before that I die, one thing I must do,

Is make sure that I never, live Life without You."


Much appreciated and enjoyed...

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Thank you I'm happy you enjoyed it ;-)

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome :)

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

بررسی های زیبا از یک
دوست زیبا.
Is that right ?

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

دوست من شما زیبا است ، با تشکر از شما برای بررسی I think that's better, lol

[AYVID N]

What script is this please...?

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Persian I do believe.

[AYVID N]

I wish I knew Persian. Its an ancient and beautiful language.

[Isla Soul]

I don't know much about poetry but I was mesmerized by this, it's written so tenderly and sweet and creates such powerful imagery.

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Wow mesmerized, I'm flattered, thank you.

[Heartful5160]

That says a lot. Great job

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Thank you.

[Heartful5160]

No Prob! Hey I just posted a article I wrote, you should check it out! Keep up the good writing!

[Gee]

I'm shut at typing,THIS not tis

[Gee]

Didn't look at pics but enjoyed tis immensely.

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Thank you so much, the pictures are breathtaking though places I never knew existed on our planet.

[Gee]

Just had a butcher's at the pics,got to say I'm gutted Anfield is not amongst them.

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Very true.

[Corset]

Those really are some very amazing destination spots, it would be so wonderful to see such things in person, lovely how you added your ladies eyes to one of the world's most glorious treasures, very endearing write.

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Thank you very much, "lovely how you added your ladies eyes" (What lady he thinks) lol

[Corset]

the one in your poem of course "While mesmerized by their beauty and blessed by their grace,
not one single place holds a candle to the allure of your face.

The curves of your body, like waves in the seas,
your eyes hold my gaze, like the mountains hold trees."

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

I was joking about being single, lol. Thank you again for the wonderful review

[Corset]

ah, I see, we'll being single has it pitfalls, but it also has it's perks ;)

[Terrence Chang]

Truly great and amazing. Thought and visual perfectly match. Well written

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

thank you Terrence my friend.

[Terrence Chang]

Your welcome

[Tiana]

Hey B! This poem is truly amazing! Capturing the essence of love that is so incredibly breathtaking ... Beautifully written, B!

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Thank you so much for the compliments. I'm glad you enjoyed.

[Tiana]

My pleasure! I really enjoyed it ...

[Dhaye]

Life is really beautiful and wonderful especially if you are living happily with your loved ones.
This is amazing, Don't Just B Amazing, B Amazing! :)

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Thank you so much and you are so right, I hope you and your loved ones always find both.

[Ally]

That was incredible! I love how you made it so vivid:) Good job!

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Thank You so much.