Our God

The moment when you realize that your trapped

when theirs no where to go

no escape, no way out

complete silence covers you like a blanket

Your left alone with your worst enemy..

yourself

You start talking to yourself

you start fighting with the walls

you have a mind full of isnane ideas

a whisper in the back of your head

telling you to murder

to steal

to abuse

to bully

to hurt

But this whispers the devil

you are now his slave

and are really introuble

no way out now

no turnning back

But just when you lose all hope

you ask the mot caring loving Savoir to forgive you and save you

And a bright light start pulling you out of the flames

Its God

The most furious

Most braves, most powerfullest, most loving, most intellgense

your hero

just remeber God will always be there for you

He will always forgive you and give you another chance

Hes the reason your here right now

so every cance you have take a moment

and give him praise and thanks for everything he has given to you

Because without him...

Ther would be no freedom..

Nor no love

God is my hero

and hes my everything

So just take some time and think to yourself

What have you ever done for him to show you appreciate what he has done for you.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the ending to the poem.
"Because without him...
Ther would be no freedom..
Nor no love
God is my hero
and hes my everything"
A wise man chooses wisely in their life. We will pay for our good and bad in the end. A amazing poem. Made me think.
Coyote