Faerytale

Something I wrote in a little under a minute, haha

I live in pop-up books

and drink tea made from pure cane sugar

My days are short

my naps are long

and I have no worries because

I can exist here forever

The trees sway with my movements

and I can make up any dance I want

because my time here is infinite

Nobody knows I exist here

no one, in fact, knows that I exist

I'd never have it any differently

Thinking about anything bigger than me

makes me dizzy

so the trees are never taller than my height

Even giraffes, the poor things

can barely reach my knees

If I sit cross-legged, and if I squeeze my eyes shut

I can almost see them

All those in history books and science journals

Living out the possible, the real

and the already been there, already done that

But I, don't live anywhere near them

I, sit in summer breezes and sigh

because there is nothing sweeter

than sugar cane tea

and the setting sun behind the mountains

in a world of my own

Author's Note

Just looking mostly for form. I've been told I have a great way of wording things but the technical stuff like line breaks and punctuation choice could sometimes be corrected

Reviews

[A]

So cute! It's so uplifting and this poem made me smile! Great imagery and descriptions! Great poem! :)