I Wish We Were~

I Wish We Were~

I wish we were
Like birds
No bounds, no boundaries
No borders

Free spreading wings
Flew in sky's
Hop in meadows
Singing heart desires
Whole world as home
Single room enough
To survive
No struggle for royalties
No sleepless nights

I wish we were
Like breeze
No bounds, no boundaries
No borders

Floating around
With ease
North, south, east, west
As pleased
Playing with flowers
With tease
No captivating thoughts
Just released
Feeling butterflies
Tender feets
Following bees
Buzzing fleet

Alas! Balouch
I wish we were
Like those humans
No bounds, no boundaries
No borders

Angelic heart and
Devine soul to feel
Created with love
And peace
Made lords on
All other breeds
Fruits, flowers, honey
To get pleased
No satanic thoughts
No devilish greed
With love and loyalty
Treating everyone
As free

Asif Balouch
Copyright January 12, 2016

Reviews

[Aswin R Prasad]

Great poetry here!
I love reading poems that gives me hope just because my poems are always sad ones ! :)
And i loved this one.. how you wrote each word to give it emotion and loved how you framed it!

Thanks for sharing such a lovely and true write!
Hope to read more of you works in the near future! :)

[Asif Balouch]

Sadness is part of emotions instead it's most strongest and beautiful part whicg creates outstanding works :)
Thank you for your review it means a lot to me :)

[Juzo Bhattarai]

Thoughts on breeze beautifully described! Loved reading that part!

[Asif Balouch]

It's a wish of every beautiful heart and soul...Thank you so much for your review :)