The downstairs apartment

Two soon to be lovers finally meet. They only know each other online.

I was so excited to see you arrive at the gate.  You looked tired, but amazing.   

I went to you and you smiled brightly.  You put your bags down to hug me completely. 

We walked to the lot in awkwardness as this was our first meeting.

I reached out for you as you were set to enter my car.  You felt so good, although I barely touched you.  You then smiled beautifully at me as you entered my waiting car.

We stopped at a bar for a drink on the way back to my home.  Neither of us were hungry for food.  I marveled at how enchanting you looked.

Later we arrived at my small basement apartment in the city.  I carried your bags inside.  The only light at midday was the natural light from each of the windows.

I thought we would settle inside, share a movie, and have polite conversation before retiring in separate rooms for the night.

I was delighted to see how close you had moved to me on the couch.  I could have sat on this couch with you for a thousand years.  Your legs looked amazing in your pretty dress. 

Unexpectedly, you reached over to take my drink from me, stood up, reached out for my hand, and led me to the other room.

I was flush with excitement and short of breath as you stood in front of my bed and gave me a lingering gaze.  I kept moving toward you so that I could see nothing but your serene face.

You put your hands on my shoulders as I reached down to kiss you softly.  A minute later we were in full embrace as our kissing became more intent. Your lips felt like heaven.  Your breath was hot. 

We involuntarily fell back onto the bed not slowing in our magical kiss.  I held you firmly as I couldn’t hide my readiness for what would happen next.

I stopped briefly to reach down and remove your socks so that I could enjoy your loveliness complete. Nothing could stop our next movements.

At the foot of the bed I reached for your waiting foot in order to start my ascent.  The taste of each of your toes was exquisite.  My hands reached to explore and handle your shapely white calves. 

I started to move up your beautiful body as you whimpered at this sweet, unexpected intensity.  Kissing your knees was perhaps the highlight thus far of my existence. 

Later, I quickly entered your sweet love canal.  You were ready and waiting.  Your moistness told me of our mutual desire.

Our intoxicating love making continued for over two hours.  You then fell exhaustedly into my waiting arms warm and sated.

Our breathing was only starting to abate when I could hear your rhythmic sleep.  I couldn’t join you in slumber yet as I could only just patiently wait for our next delightful lovemaking.

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i almost miss dating (i've taken an extended break). this story depicts modern love with accuracy and without being judgemental or political. there's a pureness to it which i deeply appreciated. it captures the thrill of romance in its early stages and leaves it to the reader's imagination what happens after. it's a comfortable way to end the evening.

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you! I appreciate your positivity. That means a lot.

[Eternity]

Wow! Honestly! My computer actually flipped off this site, it got so hot!

Truly, I thought the entire scenario was written with finesse and adequate restraint. Me, I have a tendency to off the rails in details at times and at the end of the day, I delete en masse.

Awesome job, Franky.

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you! Some haven't liked this but I'm happy you did. I appreciate you.

[Eternity]

@Franky, I tend to be harsh sounding..But this writing is especially tender. I like the way it's written "to" the lover as it make it more personal. It's loving and sweet. Thanks for sharing, friend.

[Ballpark Frank]

Wow! I greatly appreciate those thoughts Glenda. Thank you!

[cain_notfound]

It's experiences like these that I feel we can remember the best, great work which really highlights the view of a man in love.

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you Cain! I greatly appreciate your thoughts.

[maya_online]

I think there is such a beauty in meeting someone for the first time who you know so well, I also like the pacing between each moment. I think the erotic scene was paced well, too, not too much but just enough for the average reader. Lovely writing, Franky!

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you Immensely. I greatly appreciate your thoughts Maya. 💕

[Samuel Dickens]

Experiences like this are way back in my past, but yep--I can still mentally put myself there, and whoopee! Yeah, you laid this one out like a dream, a real "I got lucky last night" encounter that one never forgets. Excellent writing, Franky.

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you Sam. I appreciate your thoughts!

[Clarisse]

This lovely story really tampered with my heart. I could imagen every second of the story unfolding. I like that the sentences are spread apart...

[Ballpark Frank]

I'm so glad. 🙂🙂 Thank you.

[Clarisse]

Why couldn't the narrator join the girl?

[living lavender]

the emotional build up...loved this read.
trying to figure the other out. both having secret desires.
{the subtle connection. turning into a wild fire.}

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you Lavender. What a nice review.

[Coffeeprincess]

Wow, steamy! I love it. I felt like I was there. Every word was intimate, captivating, and engaging. You can feel the chemistry between the lovers is strong. I love your description of silky skin.

[Ballpark Frank]

Oh thank you! What a nice review. Sometimes i really need positives like that.

[Dilan Gray]

Such a sensual picture you've painted with your words. I love the intimacy.

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you. I am honored to have you read and comment.

[Dilan Gray]

You're welcome!

[Unforgiven II]

Lol. Just what every guy wants: instant sex, with no commitment whatsoever.