Feeling it

It happened one night.

When I saw you   I knew

 

You had that look  The look that said yes

 

We had only been friends  This now changed

 

My mouth went dry   Your heart pounded

 

You smiled so sweet   My eyes so bright

 

I walked to you   You stood your space

 

You appeared unsure   My breathing was not

 

I sized you up   The momentum moved us

 

You stood in your area   The game was on

 

I touched your face   You didn't flinch

 

You looked up   I could hear your heart

 

You smiled sweetly   I kissed your lips

 

We knew

Reviews

[Lorelei1969]

I love the way love is portrayed in this poem; the differences in the reactions, the knowing, the start to finish. When you know, you know and I honestly believe in most situations we know! I was able to envision the looks, the expressions, the gestures. Even writing this review I can picture each face. Well done!

[Franky]

Oh my! Thank you! It was completely fiction but it flowed somehow. I appreciate you reading this. Very kind.

[sonnie ibadah]

Simple and beautiful. Lovely piece.

[Franky]

Thank you dear.

[moog-drika]

I find it very relatable since my current boyfriend and I were friends for 5 years then went into relationship. He was in love since the start but I wasn't sure at first. Yet his intense love made me fall for him and now we are together since around 4 years.
You have written that feeling beautifully.

[Franky]

Thank you so much! Sorry I never got back earlier.

[Kari Rakitan]

This is very sweet and lots of fun. My husband and I started as friends with benefits, and the romance developed much later, so it wasn't quite like this for us, but this is a beautiful scenario all the same.

[Franky]

Thank you so much. My marriage was similar at the beginning.....