I love the way love is portrayed in this poem; the differences in the reactions, the knowing, the start to finish. When you know, you know and I honestly believe in most situations we know! I was able to envision the looks, the expressions, the gestures. Even writing this review I can picture each face. Well done!
Posted 8 Months Ago
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8 Months Ago
Oh my! Thank you! It was completely fiction but it flowed somehow. I appreciate you reading th.. read moreOh my! Thank you! It was completely fiction but it flowed somehow. I appreciate you reading this. Very kind.
i always enjoy love stories with happy endings. never happened in real life, not for me. but i like these stories. there was one time i thought i'd broke through the friendzone, but that was a big miscalculation on my half. we're still friends though. yeah, but it was a cool piece that captured that one shot really vividly.
Posted 1 Week Ago
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1 Week Ago
Thank you Ern. I really appreciate your thoughts and reading this too.
The layout, the brevity - of each part of the emotion or action, gently speeds the relationship onwards and forwards into that special time when.. 'we knew'. Is like positive turmoil gathering momentum already knowing its final destination! Fine poem and scrumptiously perfect seduction!
This is a really nice love poem. No need to over complicate things.
When you know, you know. You capture the moment perfectly, drawing your reader into the scene.
I love the way love is portrayed in this poem; the differences in the reactions, the knowing, the start to finish. When you know, you know and I honestly believe in most situations we know! I was able to envision the looks, the expressions, the gestures. Even writing this review I can picture each face. Well done!
Posted 8 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Months Ago
Oh my! Thank you! It was completely fiction but it flowed somehow. I appreciate you reading th.. read moreOh my! Thank you! It was completely fiction but it flowed somehow. I appreciate you reading this. Very kind.
Oh, how unique! The way you flip flop…. You, then her…. Her then you….. and at the end the “we”!
It is sweet, creative and playful! A lot like flirting itself.
I very much enjoyed reading
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
You are too kind. Thanks though. That's a great review.
I need a space to share my writings so i can grow as a writer. I mostly write short stories, but I'm working on a book about a serious family saga.
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