I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Franky]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[VJWild]

I can relate to this a thousand percent. Simple and to the point. Thoughts always racing and this says it all!

[Franky]

You are so kind! Thank you dear.

[wordman]

we should n have to wonder,but we do,good write

[Franky]

You are right. Thxnk for reading!

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey Frankie :-)

OHHHH the uncertainties of love, God help us all....lol.
My kind of poem!!! I love it from the start and the end, perfect!!!
Written from your heart, I felt it ;-)

But life always has beautiful surprises in the universe magical box, one just need to truly believe in that from the heart.
Superb!!!
Stay happy,
Sil

[Franky]

Wow. That touched my heart. Thank you dear sweet lady....

[Silmara McGarry]

You are truly welcome!

[Franky]

You are so much kinder than most here. Lol thx for that

[Silmara McGarry]

;-))))) Thank you!

[Franky]

Thank you,!! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Tina H.W.]

Wow Frankie, I haven't reviewed a poem or story on here for four years. I have no idea what made me choose you or this particular poem, but it's so weird that your words in this poem has really touched my heart and hits home exactly what it's feeling at this time. It's very relatable and beautifully written. Well done 😊

[Franky]

Thank you so much. That means the world to me. I rarely get reviewed to be honest unless I reviewed 4 or 5 writes of someone else's.

I've come and gone a few times here as well. Hugs to you.

[Tina H.W.]

You're welcome 😊 It really is such a heartfelt poem. Hugs to you too.

[Franky]

You are very special to say so. I've been here off and on for 11 years. So I've come and gone too. thank you from my heart for your reading and reviewing this.

[Tina H.W.]

It's my pleasure. I didn't choose this beautiful poem, it chose me. 😊

[Ayvid N]

One sided love or one that comes with encumbrances can be quite a weight to bear. Always subdued, always hushed, it almost always gets crushed under its own burden of guilt, of longings choked too long. Your words are very relatable and the angst is palpable throughout.

[Franky]

Thank you! This situation wasa crazy and unwise one. Yikes!

[Kaylor Mason]

Wondering too much can drive you crazy. I love how you made the text red--it showed the urgency of the man's heart. I also like the honesty of it. Nice work.

[Franky]

It was about a real situation. Thank you for reading!

[Audrey M.]

Jeez, you shouldn't have to guess. You see it clearly in their eyes (eyes can't lie) or they come out and say unless they too have a hard time expressing themselves then I don't know.🤷
Glad I found this. I'm enjoying your work Frankie 😊

[Franky]

thank you dear

[X]

love always leaves us open raw and vulnerable as it seeks to be accepted...heartfelt write Frankie!

[Franky]

This situation was several years ago now. I just found this write recently though. Thank you for your reading . :-)

[X]

I have poems that I wrote a 50 years ago and they are still fresh and meaningful as the day I wrote them...good words dont get stale...:)

[Franky]

Can i ask a favor? Would you please read my story called Gams? I would be happy to read more of yours too.

[X]

I only read short poetry...as a book publisher my mind is overloaded...Thank you for reading mine!

[Chris Shaw]

You can never be certain with love. Only fools rush in.

Chris

[Franky]

I agree! And I was a fool in this situation ....

[Chris Shaw]

Better luck next time.

[Jane Bruce]

Aww so sweet, I was almost saying, "Tell him, tell him"

[Franky]

Thank you Jane. I appreciate you reading this.