I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Franky]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Haley]

This is a great poem! Whenever you have a crush, or in love, all these "what-if's" run through our heads sometimes making it hard to think straight. With this line, "About me telling you what's in my heart, And how your reaction could tear me apart" is very powerful!

[Franky]

You are very kind. Nice to see you again.

[Kerra]

Sweet poem, just have to believe good things are coming..

[Tina]

Sweet poem, I'd say take a chance. Regret it not fun.

[Franky]

Well.....I did take the chance. This was a really life situation. But it didn't end the way I wanted. 😬

[Tina]

Sorry about that

[Suzanne Sonderleigh]

Lovely poem. I like the rhythm of the words. It’s easy to see you write with much emotion…straight from your heart in this poem. Great write!

[Franky]

Thank you so much Suzanne.

[NotUsinganymore]

I like the lingering of love the poem has. It gave a nice touch of sadness to it.

[Franky]

Thank you so much!

[NotUsinganymore]

You are welcome! Please check out my poem too!

[Azifwecare]

I can relate to this. Oh and the internal torture. I was afraid if I said anything... One of those damned if you do/don't situations. Loved the poem my friend.

[Franky]

You are awesome for reading this and commenting. I liked writing this, but im not great at these writes. Lol

[Azifwecare]

It's important to say what you want to say or write it for that matter. Better than bottling it up inside. You don't have to be "great" I honestly think when people see it they will gravitate to it or not, and it's ok if they don't. Remember to write for you. Not to please the crowd.

[Unspoken poet]

Such a lovely write here, Love the rhyme scheme

[Franky]

thank you dear. You are very kind. 😀

[SheIsMe]

I completely understand this one on so many levels. It's a tortured but blissful thing. One that you can't bear to lose. You expressed it well and the emotion in this piece is real.

[Franky]

Thank you so much. This is actually something I wrote 15 yrs ago. I was very much in love, but it's a good thing that things didn't work out. She was not what I thought she was.

[Samuel Dickens]

What Margie said. Looking back at my own life, I have to ask myself whether a guy's intense desire for a woman is really a good thing or not. In this well-penned poem, it's obvious that someone has a really bad case of it. I want him to succeed, to be brought beside her with flowers, birds flittering and an angel choir. Sadly, I know that might not happen. Still, we will have hope.

[Franky]

Thank you Sam. I am very pleased you took the time to read this. I wrote this about 15 years ago. I have changed much in that time in many ways.

Have a wonderful weekend.

[Seriana]

Lovely write. What caught me immediately was the font color. You don't see red much for that. It brought a presence of the speakers voice. I liked the short, rhymed lines.
Nicely done!

[Franky]

You are kind... This means a lot since you are pretty talented. Thanks! I'm just learning.