I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[ETERNITY]

Alrighty then! That kind of negates my advice: Just talk. Do not 'push' for anything more than friendship until you both "know"...and you will.

[KAREN]

Heartfelt and written with emotion!

[Cori Kate]

This was such a lovely read and so full of feeling! Sometimes the wondering is more uncomfortable than the final answer.

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you Cori. I wrote this while very much in love with a co worker. It didn't end well.

[lessa (kenzie)]

WOW!! Love the rhyme scheme, This is so good. but all the what if's that could be.
This is amazing, so well expressed and powerful as well

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you for your kind encouragement. That means a lot.

[Haley]

This is a great poem! Whenever you have a crush, or in love, all these "what-if's" run through our heads sometimes making it hard to think straight. With this line, "About me telling you what's in my heart, And how your reaction could tear me apart" is very powerful!

[Ballpark Frank]

You are very kind. Nice to see you again.

[Kerra]

Sweet poem, just have to believe good things are coming..

[Tina]

Sweet poem, I'd say take a chance. Regret it not fun.

[Ballpark Frank]

Well.....I did take the chance. This was a really life situation. But it didn't end the way I wanted. 😬

[Tina]

Sorry about that

[Suzanne Sonderleigh]

Lovely poem. I like the rhythm of the words. It’s easy to see you write with much emotion…straight from your heart in this poem. Great write!

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you so much Suzanne.

[NotUsinganymore]

I like the lingering of love the poem has. It gave a nice touch of sadness to it.

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you so much!

[NotUsinganymore]

You are welcome! Please check out my poem too!

[Azifwecare]

I can relate to this. Oh and the internal torture. I was afraid if I said anything... One of those damned if you do/don't situations. Loved the poem my friend.

[Ballpark Frank]

You are awesome for reading this and commenting. I liked writing this, but im not great at these writes. Lol

[Azifwecare]

It's important to say what you want to say or write it for that matter. Better than bottling it up inside. You don't have to be "great" I honestly think when people see it they will gravitate to it or not, and it's ok if they don't. Remember to write for you. Not to please the crowd.

[Unspoken poet]

Such a lovely write here, Love the rhyme scheme

[Ballpark Frank]

thank you dear. You are very kind. 😀