I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Franky]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Scott Kris]

It is a game for the brave indeed. For all who know any of love’s truth know enough to own a healthy fear… Yet it grows into a respect and we take to the battle not without fear, because we know the fight is worth the struggle.

Fun read. Thank you for sharing.

Scott.

[Franky]

Thank you Scott. That means a lot. I appreciate it.

[Aura]

Love is so complex, as we are unsure of how the other person would react to our confession if it was a crush. The line "I do wonder" is such a great one, as I interpret it as this person being imaginative of all of Scenarios in this poem and what could happen if it became reality, what would the other person do or say? I enjoyed reading this, the title "I do wonder" is a good one, conveys imagination

[Franky]

Thank you so much! This is describing a woman who i fell very much in love with.....although neither of us was free at the time. They were powerful feelings....but to no avail. It turns out that i was much better off.

[Aura]

I see, sometimes love doesn't last for a reason.

[Robert Haigh]

I think we've all been there. But if we don't let that person know how we feel, we can never have them by our side. Better to risk rejection than keep silent and suffer the fate of unrequited love.

[Franky]

You are wise. Thank you for reading this

[Dilan Gray]

I love this poem so much. It is so beautiful and flows so perfectly!

[Franky]

Thank you Dilan. I appreciate your thoughts.

[duff]

Heartache growing until the release. There's always a space for letting go. Nice job.

[Franky]

Hi Duff. I appreciate you taking the time and reviewing. sorry i didnt notice your review.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Franki, this is beautifully written! I loved the repeated lines! I believe a lot of people can relate to this poem!

[Franky]

Ah thank you! You are so kind. ☺

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure!

[Franky]

I need the encouragement.... thanks again.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

It was really good!

[slfisher89]

Perfectly captures the anxiety, infatuation, and fear of rejection of a crush

[Franky]

Thank you so much! You are so kind.

[KAREN]

Heartfelt and written with emotion!

[Cori Kate]

This was such a lovely read and so full of feeling! Sometimes the wondering is more uncomfortable than the final answer.

[Franky]

Thank you Cori. I wrote this while very much in love with a co worker. It didn't end well.

[lessa (kenzie)]

WOW!! Love the rhyme scheme, This is so good. but all the what if's that could be.
This is amazing, so well expressed and powerful as well

[Franky]

Thank you for your kind encouragement. That means a lot.