I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Franky]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

I read your poem and was moved by the raw emotion and vulnerability that you expressed. Your words capture the intensity of falling in love with someone and the confusion and uncertainty that can come with those feelings. I appreciated the way you used repetition to emphasize your wonderings and to create a sense of urgency in your words.
Your poem also touched on some important themes, such as the fear of rejection and the difficulty of being true to oneself in the face of uncertainty and risk. I felt a sense of empathy for the speaker in your poem, and I appreciated the way you explored these complex emotions with honesty and sensitivity.
Overall, I thought your poem was beautifully written and deeply felt. Your words capture the essence of what it means to be human and to experience the ups and downs of love and relationships. Thank you for sharing your work with the world, and I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future.

[Franky]

What a wonderful review! Thank you from deep in my heart for your honest and helpfil.thoughts and points. I appreciate you greatly.

[Lisasview]

quite difficult..
Crazy computer...sorry, had to continue here... So weird.
Anyway, definitely enjoyed the read!
Lisa, now in Spain

[Lisasview]

Quite relatable... being honest with ones feelings and trusting that the person you are pouring your heart out too is someone you can trust can be q

[Franky]

Wow. Thank you for your thoughtfulness. I appreciate it greatly.

[Lisasview]

You are so welcome...
lisa

[Franky]

I am very glad you took the time to read and reflect your thoughts. You are very encouraging. 😀

[Lisasview]

I truly believe that writers ~ poets need to encourage other writers ~ poets to work on their words..
Lisa

[Ioana Mihai]

Lovely poem!
Love is beautiful anyway…. Sweet and bitter like a dark chocolate… still a blessing to be able to love. As long as we live we shall love

[Franky]

What a wonderful comment. Thank you from my heart. ❤️‍🩹

[Ioana Mihai]

Welcome, from the heart as well
Your poem inspired my words, your creation keeps creating into the readers new emotions and metaphors ❤️

[Franky]

You are very kind. Thank you.my new friend.

[Susan 🦋]

Love and the tenderhearted. Sigh. Those complications can really damage a soul, but always choose to love. :)

[Franky]

You are very kind Susan. Thank you.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

You can pour the love out of your heart and be drowned by it. Others are not always capable of receiving it. Thankfully, it is like a river and returns to its source - you. You can love yourself until it's right to love another. You have expressed your emotions very well in this poem, and it is a poem to which we can all relate. Well done.

[Franky]

Thank you so much Linda. I love your writing so I feel really good about this great comment.

[Kelly Scheppers]

When you're in love with someone, you have a tendency to hesitate what so badly wants to be spoken. We're always second guessing ourselves or over analyzing words and feelings that get stuck in our throat. I'd say take a chance. Love is worth the leap, the faith!

[Lilly]

Love can come with many complications, but hopefully they end up being worth it!
I feel there is so much longing, but also conflicting emotions in this. Craving, wishing, waiting for someone, but also a feeling that timing wasn't right, or something is in the way stopping anything from happening.
Nice poem :)

[Franky]

Thanks so much. This one ended badly though. I threw caution to the wind, expressed my feelings, and was shot down. But, that's life.

[Franky]

But actually......things worked out for the better. Lol

[Mauricio Montoya]

Lost love but I love in this write it's love never had.
Thank you for sharing

[Franky]

Thank you, and how very true.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Your welcome for an excellent write

[Red Brick Keshner]

If love fuelled courage then stories would have peaked and summited over and over again, it is the half of bravery's possibilities that gives us hope.

[Franky]

Thank you! I appreciate your thoughtful comment.