I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Glenda]

Alrighty then! That kind of negates my advice: Just talk. Do not 'push' for anything more than friendship until you both "know"...and you will.

[Blooming Flower]

I found this relatable. I'm always hesitant to confess any feelings I have and always try to push the emotions away. It's a wonderful piece!

[Şenay🥀]

A passionate poem about unrequited love

[Ballpark Frank]

Yes. It happened. It's life I guess. It's good to write when emotional I think.

[Şenay🥀]

I think when you infuse your writing with emotions, you can create an emotional connection that resonates with your reader and leaves a lasting impact.

[Ballpark Frank]

I agree. How nice that is too. I'm a readwe of novels no doubt.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

the poem from the first line expresses vulnerability. and the final line drives in the nail. being in love is to gamble, and many lose. but maybe i will win? that question lingers in all lovers, and while i wish it could work out for everyone, all is fair in love and war, and some are eventually left torn apart.

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you Ern! I appreciate you're reading my stuff.

[Arundass TP]

Nicely written poem. Excellent writing 👍

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you so much. You're very kind.

[Rubi]

Franky i love it its absolutely beautiful

[Ballpark Frank]

Awwwwwwww. Thank u!

[Rubi]

Alg hope to see more

[mou]

The repetition of 'I do wonder' syncs perfectly with the delicacy of a heart.
Sometimes this 'I do wonder' gains too much weight to bear. Nice poem, Franky
- mou

[Ballpark Frank]

So nice of you. 🙂 Thank you

[mou]

You're welcome :)

[Gaia Octavia]

Ah, the hesitant unsurety of love. A rich well to draw from artistically, and this is a powerfully vulnerable piece. It reads like a whispered confession in the dark. Nicely done!

[Ballpark Frank]

Awe!: thanks straight from my heart. What a wonderful review. I appreciate you!

[Lizzy B]

Rejection is powerful but grows us. We are all rejected in some way and forced to either push through or pivot. 🧘🏻‍♀️⬆️ ✨️ Always Go for it! That's what I say. Very Relatable piece 👌 👏

[Ballpark Frank]

I agree! Thanks.

[Writergurl]

So very nicely written, I love the poetic feel of this write as well.
Awesome write

[Ballpark Frank]

That's very kind. Especially since I'm more of a story writer.

[Writergurl]

the last story I wrote has a little over 1,000 pages. I don't write too many stories anymore.

[Ballpark Frank]

Why stop? What was it about,

[Writergurl]

It was called "Jenny's Colt" A little girl who got a colt for her birthday and it got stolen from her about a month later. Everyone went searching for it, a couple years later the horse was found, it had got away from the person who stole it, she went through lengths to prove that it was once hers, I won her case. (Will this is the jest of it.

[Ballpark Frank]

Is it posted here?

[Writergurl]

No, I lost it when I moved from Tennessee

[Ballpark Frank]

Oh ok. That's too bad. I like a good read here.

[Writergurl]

I miss that story so bad, I have been trying to piece together what I remember from the story

[Ballpark Frank]

Ok. I'd read it. 😀