I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Franky]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

the poem from the first line expresses vulnerability. and the final line drives in the nail. being in love is to gamble, and many lose. but maybe i will win? that question lingers in all lovers, and while i wish it could work out for everyone, all is fair in love and war, and some are eventually left torn apart.

[Franky]

Thank you Ern! I appreciate you're reading my stuff.

[Arundass TP]

Nicely written poem. Excellent writing 👍

[Franky]

Thank you so much. You're very kind.

[Rubi]

Franky i love it its absolutely beautiful

[Franky]

Awwwwwwww. Thank u!

[Rubi]

Alg hope to see more

[mou]

The repetition of 'I do wonder' syncs perfectly with the delicacy of a heart.
Sometimes this 'I do wonder' gains too much weight to bear. Nice poem, Franky
- mou

[Franky]

So nice of you. 🙂 Thank you

[mou]

You're welcome :)

[Gaia Octavia]

Ah, the hesitant unsurety of love. A rich well to draw from artistically, and this is a powerfully vulnerable piece. It reads like a whispered confession in the dark. Nicely done!

[Franky]

Awe!: thanks straight from my heart. What a wonderful review. I appreciate you!

[Lizzy B]

Rejection is powerful but grows us. We are all rejected in some way and forced to either push through or pivot. 🧘🏻‍♀️⬆️ ✨️ Always Go for it! That's what I say. Very Relatable piece 👌 👏

[Franky]

I agree! Thanks.

[Writergurl]

So very nicely written, I love the poetic feel of this write as well.
Awesome write

[Franky]

That's very kind. Especially since I'm more of a story writer.

[Writergurl]

the last story I wrote has a little over 1,000 pages. I don't write too many stories anymore.

[Franky]

Why stop? What was it about,

[Writergurl]

It was called "Jenny's Colt" A little girl who got a colt for her birthday and it got stolen from her about a month later. Everyone went searching for it, a couple years later the horse was found, it had got away from the person who stole it, she went through lengths to prove that it was once hers, I won her case. (Will this is the jest of it.

[Franky]

Is it posted here?

[Writergurl]

No, I lost it when I moved from Tennessee

[Franky]

Oh ok. That's too bad. I like a good read here.

[Writergurl]

I miss that story so bad, I have been trying to piece together what I remember from the story

[Franky]

Ok. I'd read it. 😀

[Shweta]

The charm's taken me over
For I could not think nor lure

Well put! The turmoil and confusion, charm and fantasy, love and fear all so evident in this yet to blossom love story..

[Franky]

You're even poetic in your reviews! How nice. Thank you my new friend.

[Starbaby]

Nothing ventured, nothing gained. You can only play your cards so close to your chest for so long before you have to declare your hand. Love is a crap shoot at best, but the payoff, if it comes, is sweet and rich. That moment of vulnerability, when we are perched on the precipice of love and acceptance or the despair and agony of rejection. We have all been there, and can all understand the feelings here.

[Franky]

Thank you! This one didn't work out though. But it's a good thing it didn't as it turned out.