Circle, Vicious

Circle, Vicious

A Poem by Balkaran Sidhu
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The Vicious Circle.....of...you will know what......

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Speak with me
Talk with me
Don't argue with me
Sit with me
Stand with me
Don't leave me
Come to me
Stay with me
Don't fight with me
Walk with me
Run with me
Don't run from me
Trust me
Share with me
Don't keep secrets from me
Smile with me
Laugh with me
Cry with me
Don't shy from me
Fall in Love with me
Kiss me
Hug me
Miss me
Speak with me
Talk with me
Argue with me
Sit with me
Stand with me
Leave me
Come to me
Stay with me
Go far from me
Walk with me
Run with me
Run from me
Trust me
Share with me
Keep secrets from me
Smile with me
Laugh with me
Cry with me
Shy from me
Fall in Love with me
Kiss me
Hug me
Miss me
Speak with me
Talk with me
Argue with me..
Its THE VICIOUS CIRCLE

© 2015 Balkaran Sidhu


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life itself is a vicious circle though
nicely written

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hey!!! Its really nice piece of writing and is the truth...At least according to me...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Though its a great write, these lines reminded me of someone who always uttered similar words and expected me to do like that, but never considered me as eligible to get the same respect. So, I would like to name it as a typical male chauvinistic attitude. It may not be....but.....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Balkaran Sidhu

9 Years Ago

haha...remeber...the coin has 2 sides...and thats the way it is...
P.S.- They teach us the mo.. read more
It's nice. Your words willingly fight with eachother's and their selves. Beautifully tragic and yet we all understand it. As always, nice work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


It is indeed...but love is the foundation that can heal most things..lovely piece...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Balkaran Sidhu

9 Years Ago

Thank you pops :)
Sounds much like the better marriage that two work together to make it last. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Balkaran Sidhu

9 Years Ago

Yeah cheers to that..thnx
Its the lovers' separation before the advent of the inquirium ... into a life lived. She may prefer to have you respond alone on how you found the relationship with her to be. Its also a circle for the advancement of life.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Balkaran Sidhu

9 Years Ago

true that :)

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Added on August 22, 2015
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Balkaran Sidhu
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Hanumangarh, Rajasthan, India



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