As the Sunlight that Dies in the Night but Resurrects again every Morning

There are those evening moments

when my love threatens to ceize for you

I realise the pain and I move on

And then there are these morning moments when

How I realize I have loved you always

More than myself

More than the essential nutrients

More than the sunlight

More than the air

You are in my heart and my mouth

Like incadencent saliva

Like noiseless dew

Like a harmonious beat that carries me

I miss you always

In my little moments

Between the time's tiny atoms

Memories of how we smiled together

But I can never truly smile again

While you are in some unknown territory

The clouds of loneliness

haunt me, surround my morning again

There is no sunlight, only a little hope of it

There are flowers next to me

When I wake up to your name

I see how last night,the stars were not

As numerous as today

I have grown into a beloved passenger

Where love is my home

I who begged you to stay here

In a crossword puzzle lifetime

Of loving more than life itself.

Reviews

[Akshita]

a fine writing with no exaggrated lines...
nd a smart way of presenting ur poem with fine words....

[The dark story]

Wow!its been three weeks I have came here since…and reading this made me just speechless. I love the vibrant emotions you have penned which are so touching and makes this piece really splendid. The diction is strong enough to carry the weight of that true love in so sweet a style. I really loved the last stanza. It is really very ravishing.
Thanks for sharing!!pen on!!

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...:).........................

[That1Nerd23]

This is so beautiful. You did such an amazing job.

[Dr. Wood ?]

fine write sir.................