Ode to September

Bienvenue,dear September
Here you are, like a beloved mistress
truely standing as the spring of my life.

Thank you for bringing back the seasons of mist
and mellow fruitfulness,
Your wet sands of fertility
and the damp air, of bliss.

The gifts you once brought to me
wrapped in crystal mystics of geometry
how could I ever forget,
my first few starry nights.

The soulful peaks of ecstasy
of love,of hope, of desire
the end of my miserable days.

Those showers, that washed the late summer
the primitive biology, of existence
and how you gave birth to love,
how you raised it, like it will never fall down.

It was perhaps the nature, conspiring
to fill the fruits with ripeness to the core,
and flowers with essentials for the bees.

Thank you, beloved September
Thou art the season of hope for me

Reviews

[Aehr]

I love the description. Beautiful picture you've painted for us here.

[gombeggar]

hmm...aside from my personal dislike of the dying that is autumn and the telltale of the coming winter...yer wording does paint a beautiful picture with embracing of the September and autumn thymes

[Marie]

Setember marks an end--but your poem tells of hope for a new beginning.

[Prritiy]

It was perhaps the nature, conspiring
to fill the fruits with ripeness to the core,
and flowers with essentials for the bees.

Thank you, beloved September
Thou art the season of hope for me

nice one, liked it

best wishes

[Saumya]

o that was really lovely...:)
i really enjoyed the concept, and obviously the poem overall:)
i heartily wish, that may all the coming days, years, and months, fill you with lots and lots of more love hope, peace and enthusiasm:)
well done friend:)
best wishes,
saumya

[Dayran]

A smooth rhythm like the transformation of the warmth of summer to the chill of autumn ... indiscernible ... like a leaf changing colors to yellow. Nice

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah, a love for the month of change and hunters, well done, good read.

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Hmm nice one Balkaran. I like the lucid flow in your praise of September :-)
Jst tht the last line shud have thou instead of thy :-)