Your name is carved in my soul

Every morning, the familiar sky

high and blue, warm and tender

Liberal as her state of mind

bright and new with each beginning

Etches onto my cursed life

On plans, of desire, of attachment

But my heart is a gadget of hope

plunging my life in anticipations

I drown myself in imperishable love

It leaps without a care

shining among the revelation of nights

With a practiced devotion

it grows like a necessary weed

For love, in those intimate places.

My life is a volatile dream

unstable inside its own domains

Free as the shimmering of the ocean

liberal as her own mind.

An ambient happiness of bittersweet returns

it holds my breath together

for my last battle, with myself, with my life

Poverty and defeat are my last resorts

The color of weariness fades my soul

But my spirit lives,just under an inch

of the familiar fragrance of love.

Reviews

[afifa malik]

superb! i felt the richness of punjabi mystic flavour in it. love the imagery of Volatile Dream that remains unstable in its own Domain. ^.^

[It's Me, The Miracle]

A very good poem.....well constructed ideas and stanzas...I like it very much

[gombeggar]

so much pain in yer love life it seems

[Dayran]

The volatility of dreams arises out of its own depths and shallows of experience. They do move differently by the nature of its older and newer natures. In that it invites the denizens of the world it encounters in life to live where they deem appropriate. ... end of the day ... you realize your dream has taken shape but in the form the neighborhood is.

It may mean that the dream is waning in the Indic experience. Nice job bal.

[Dr. Wood ?]

some pretty cool lines in this one my friend..My heart is a gadget of hope.....

[Prritiy]

On plans, of desire, of attachment
But my heart is a gadget of hope
plunging my life in anticipations

Love gives us hope even in the darkest hour and remotest corner. Its really a strength that with it we can overcome unbelievable hurdles. nicely written composition, liked it.

best wishes.