Punished

Something I wrote once...couldn't complete the poem..certainly there was more to it

You punished him the most

the one who loved you the most

You never cared for the one

who cared for you

You don't want to remember the one

who breathes inside the memory of you

You made him suffer

who took all your pains on his heart

You couldn't even dare to love

who dares to sacrifice himself for you

You have only fought with the one

who fought for you

And how you rudely spoke to him

Of how he came to be friends

And how he pushed your negatives

to love you even more.

And now he is dying

As he sees no path that could bring you to him

No path that could.... 

Its those abrupt changes that brings death

when hoping and waiting doesn't seems worth

Reviews

[It's Me, The Miracle]

I remembered Jesus Christ while reading your lines.....I haven't seen anyone on this earth like this...... I must say, wonderful lines...written with a great rhythm.....I read it in the very first glimpse.....I didnt even close my eyelids once, I start reading this poem. Thanks a lot for sharing it

[Prritiy]

And how he pushed your negatives
to love you even more.
And now he is dying
As he sees no path that could bring you to him
No path that could....

a sad write.