June Reminisce

For what purpose July

have you returned again?

with the buckets of your drizzle and rainstorms

The watery constraints of the air.

 

Have you come to fill my life with essential jubilation,

to fill my nullity with sun's warmth

the quantum physics of calefaction 

Hopes whisper loudly,fields will light up again.

 

The green fertility, its among-st us

Such is the sense-less prattling

Of the winds, of sprinkled weeds

Time will regrow from the very sands 

it was buried in.

 

Farewell, my beloved June

Let your traffic of souls be merry

Aimless woes and needless dying

will bury your presence again.

With the desperation of varying glories

Let conquered palaces be forsaken,

for spirituality to hold ourselves with her immortality.

Reviews

[sakshi arora]

i cant see any scope of improvement as its perfect just wow wow and wow i loved your piece its a classic

[Dayran]

Bal, you're giving me a pollen allergy. Nice.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

the quantum physics of calefaction -- Anyone who can use this line in a poem about the seasons deserves a big pat on the back :)

Another great "seasonal" piece. I love to write the seasons...there is so much beauty in the changing of weather, which is essential to the changing of our mortal moods. "Fairwell, my beloved June"--indeed. For there is a new month on the horizon with its own set of beautiful notes to capture.

[gombeggar]

that's a bit heavy an emote fer a couple of months

[Balkaran Sidhu]

longing of those wonderful days that i had once in a summer like this...thanks for the review

[Felicity's Eve]

Amazing. So vivid that I felt I was surrounded by the summer heat in my well air conditioned room :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

haha..very well...thats a good way of enjoying poetry ..thanks for the review

[Westminster Abbey]

I always find myself expanding my vocabulary when I read your works. Excellent job!

~Abbey
:)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

ah thanks abbey :) pleasure always :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A fine and tender piece that stirs emotion and reaction within the reader, well done, good read.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you sir... :)