Your Smile has Won Me

It was no momentary occasion

That we met, And I fell in love

It was the joyous freedom of deliverance

To have met you, to have fought for you.

It was when you entered my life

At the right time

You came out as the sun

to bring life to me,to end my sufferings.

Of never being loved before

It was the time, we became sovereign

Our radiant empires merged

Among each other, dear.

You are a sacred poem to me

Its how you Entrench yourself in my heart

I let you occupy the hollowness in my moments

of my apprehensions, of my anticipations.

I call you Angel, My spirit is lifted by your holy touch

My voyages are occupied by her mystic shadow

With a grace of a goddess, pure as a rainy storm

Your smile has won me whole and true.

Reviews

[Dayran]

An eagle perched on a cliff couldn't have described the beauty of the valley better. Nice write.

[gombeggar]

That we met, And I fell in love ...a semi-colon here or loose the cap 'A' ...remember cap at the start of each line ...always always edit yerself 1st

[tuvi]

Hey Singh ,

This is really beautiful .. loved the way love and feelings are delineated....

Tuvi

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Beautiful sentiment here. You've introduced a true feeling of love and devotion in your lines. My favorite is the 3rd stanza, because I love the imagery of the sovereign and the radiant empires merged. The last stanza is also a breath of imagery filled air. Nicely done.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank u sarah :)

[sakshi arora]

its like a wonderland where alice landed :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanks for the review :)