Since We Are Separated

Since we are separated by geometry

and your persiacacity of dreams

I could only confess in my poems

I have loved you more than my own breath.

I should tell you about those morning moments

when I realize I have loved you always

More than the essential nutrients 

More than the air that fills me with life.

We were the unique lovers once

promising to make our love eternal

but our eternity lasted only

to the edge of our cradle.

Our love was not some earthly adulation

as I see it,was never a burden

I wanted us to envy the lovers 

I wanted the marriage of souls.

After all those heartbreaks I still love you

You have crayoned yourself

as the core of my heart

I was never an artist.

I wish you to be in my life again

I would replace my self with immateriality

You only can wash the clouds of loneliness 

And could fill my life with melodious hymns

Love is our home

I beg you to return here

In the passionate backyard of our artistry

where I would surrender my self to you.

Reviews

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The close of this piece is strong, but the whole thing is really wonderful. love is hell/heaven

[Inda]

Love the tenderness in these lines, also seems like we get a peek at your most private thoughts about this significant other. Great piece!

[Dayran]

Precious words expressed with longing and not without some regret. In most such instances it reminds us both of the moving hand of Khayyam and the amazing hymns of grace. Nice write.

[Don Shaw]

crayoned yourself in my heart , i love that line . Great work.

[gombeggar]

I mean to say save that line I pointed out: In the passionate backyard of our artistry ...but everything around it is overwhelming

[gombeggar]

again...good work but tone it down to a more basic wording cuz u have some wonderful lines drenched in overwriting here like: In the passionate backyard of our artistry

[Felicity's Eve]

Heartbreak and undying love expressed in a lovely poem that really tugged at my heartstrings. Beautifully penned... :)

[Loner]

Beautiful expression of true love and pain when a lover
goes through it .... awesome write...

[Alexa Tasch]

You always write such meaningful poems! And I love them! The first stanza was fabulous and the poem kept getting better with every word!

[Clive D Costa]

marvelous poetry. good way for starters